i like where this is going and the poses are strong. Here are some area that i notices. i feel that the right shoulders is a bit loose or a little disconnected. It pops forward then rotates back. Also right as he turns his head his eyes aren't focused on the girl. i would add a moving hold in the beginning so that the char doesn't seem lifeless maybe add some breathing to help the cut between u and adam's shot.
Shot is coming a long nicely! Already doing lip Sync....jealous. I did have a question on what emotion the guy is having. The first pass it seemed like he was a confident, cocky type when he said "maybe I'm reckless" This pass it seems like hes unsure and looks more like hes asking a question. Let me know if that doesn't make sense.
i like where this is going and the poses are strong. Here are some area that i notices. i feel that the right shoulders is a bit loose or a little disconnected. It pops forward then rotates back. Also right as he turns his head his eyes aren't focused on the girl. i would add a moving hold in the beginning so that the char doesn't seem lifeless maybe add some breathing to help the cut between u and adam's shot.
ReplyDeleteShot is coming a long nicely! Already doing lip Sync....jealous. I did have a question on what emotion the guy is having. The first pass it seemed like he was a confident, cocky type when he said "maybe I'm reckless" This pass it seems like hes unsure and looks more like hes asking a question. Let me know if that doesn't make sense.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys, I'll address these notes before class tuesday.
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